so here again something from me. I know the title is fine, but it seems kind of hypnotized, doesn't it? * shrug of the shoulders * who cares ... okay, let's start: * rubbing hands * Criticism number one: The guy should actually look a bit ... * raeupser * ... more masculine, somehow messed up my eyes T-T Criticism number two: His hand could use a little more shading. Criticism number three: The collar looks completely stupid -.- Criticism number four: Something about her face doesn't fit, which I probably noticed too late. It's kind of like that ... round ... * laughing war * moon face ... TZTZ I give up -.-